My Uncle is a pediatrician in Toronto, Ontario, Canada. He took forty plus years of knowledge and wrote a book on health issues for babies (0-5 yrs). This encyclopedia of information is a fantastic resource for any new parent! Lately he starting tweeting tidbits of advice on Twitter and I had a look to see how I might help improve the tweets and get more followers. Below are some of my ideas for improvement.
old: ANY REGRESSION IN #DEVELOPMENTALMILESTONES RAISES A RED FLAG.
revised: Any regression in #developmentalmilestones raises a red flag. #toddlers #babies
old: DO NOT FORCE YOUR CHILD TO EAT. IT WILL BE A BATTLE THAT YOU SELDOM WILL WIN.
revised: Do not force your #child to eat. It will be a battle that you seldom will win. #toddler #eatinghabits #parenting
old: LIMIT MILK INTAKE TO 500-600 ML (18-20 OUNCES) DAILY.MEALTIME SHOULD BE PLEASURE TIME.
revised: Limit milk intake to 500-600ml (18-20 oz) daily. Meal time should be pleasure time. #toddler #eatinghabits #parenting
old: TO PREVENT YOUR TODDLER FROM BECOMING A#PICKYEATER DO NOT FILL HIS/HER TUMMY WITH FLUIDS.
revised: To prevent #toddler from becoming a #pickyeater do not fill his/her tummy with fluids #eatinghabits
If you have further tips for improving tweets, please share so we can help Old Doc Lester share his knowledge (and learn for ourselves too!). You can follow him on twitter @DrMickeyLester.
